Another poetry square:
You me, I'll see.
I ask - but gasp;
Me choke (dumb bloke).
"Run hide!", mind cried.
This is a fun one for a number of reasons (disregarding the actual subject matter, of course). First off, I hope that you know exactly what I'm talking about despite the brevity of the work. Who hasn't felt this way at some point? (OK, don't answer that - it might make me feel bad.) The fact that it's all been boiled down to a handful of words amuses me. Secondly, the rhyming is actually done within each line, as opposed to my normal habit of rhyming of the lines themselves.
1 comment:
you've got a lot packed into those 16 words!
I think most everyone can relate to that moment of panic you so succinctly describe.
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